This is a work of fiction, using characters from the film, “No Way Back".  No insult or invasion of privacy or infringement of copyright is intended. The story is for readers over the age of 18 only, and contains adult language. The writer is not responsible for any "discomfort" caused to the reader by this language and these situations.

 

Wine, Chocolate & Bubbles!

by: Coffee

© 2/2005 

 

As I unlocked the door to the suite I could hear music playing.  Once I got inside I heard:

 

Take me to heart
And I'll always love you
And nobody can make me do wrong
But take me for granted, leaving your love unshown
Makes will power weak and temptation strong

A woman's only human
This you should understand
She's not just a plaything
She's flesh and blood, just like her man
And if you want a do right all day woman
You've gotta be a do right all night man

 

I followed the music to the bathroom.  There she was, leaning back in the tub with her eyes closed covered in a cloud of bubbles and candle light, singing along with the song. 

 

They say it's a man's world
But you can't prove that by me, noooo
And as long as we're together
Show some respect for me
If you want a do right all's day woman
You gotta be a do right all's night man

 

A woman's only human
This you should understand
She's not just a plaything
She's flesh and blood, just like her man
And if you want a do right all day woman
You've gotta be a do right all night man

 

You've gotta be a do right all night man

 

I just leant up against the door and took in this vision of total contentment. 

 

I cleared my throat and said,  “Hard day at work today?”

 

“Oh thank goodness you’re here!  Could you do an enormous favor for me, Sugar?”

 

“I suppose...”

 

“I forgot my bottle of wine and glass in the kitchen!  Would you please be ever so kind as to go fetch it for me?”

 

“I guess I could do that for you, Mizz Scarlet, is it?” I laughed as I headed towards the kitchen.  When I returned, I raised an eyebrow and asked, “So I could only guess you wanted the bottle in the bucket of ice and the bowl of Hershey Kisses sitting next to it, BUT just ONE glass?”

 

“Ahh Sugar – I didn’t know if I would still be in the bath when you got home!  I hope you brought a glass for yourself.  You know it is just not proper for a lady to drink alone!”

I grinned and poured the wine in our glasses and I started to sit down.

 

“OH Sugar?  Would you do me another favor?”

 

“What do you need, Mizz Scarlet?”

 

“My bath is getting a little tepid; would you turn the hot water on and warm it up again for me?”

 

“Okay!” I added the hot water and watched as she slid back and forth, back and forth to mix the hot water with the cooled water.  I was kneeling down next to the tub so she could not see that my cock was getting harder and aching with each slide back and forth.

“Let me release the plug so we don’t overflow the tub, Sugar.” 

 

A bubble covered toe popped out of the water and pushed the plug release.

“Hmmm - - More bubbles too, Sugar!!  That is so much better; you wouldn’t want me to get a chill?”

 

As I start to sit down again, I hear:

“I am so sorry, but could you pour me a little more wine?”

 

I leant over to pour the wine and a bubble covered hand came out of the water and grabbed my tie.

“I need a little sugar with that wine.”

 

She pulled me down and her lips met mine and her tongue nudged between my teeth to meet mine, pulling it into her mouth as I stuck my hand into the water and caressed her breast. Even with the hot water her nipple was hard and erect under my touch.  She let go of my tie and brought her wet hand up to my face.

 

“Now, Sugar, if you’re going to do that I believe you may be a tad over dressed!”

 

I had taken my shoes and socks off on my way back from getting the wine so I stepped into the tub. My Little “Mizz Scarlet” gasped and giggled losing all her sultry “Southern Composure”.

 

“Zack - - What the???”

 

I unbuckled my belt while a pair of wet bubble covered hands reached up and unzipped my pants and grabbed the waist band and jerked my pants and boxers down in one motion down to my ankles.  I caught a quick glimpse of bubbles dripping off her nipples before she sunk back down into the water.  With that I got down on my knees, grabbing my now soaked pants from around my ankles and throwing them out the bathroom door.   I was being pulled slowly forward by my neck tie which came off and went the way of my pants.  After the tie, the wet hands worked at the buttons on my shirt as I finally was close enough to cover her mouth with mine for a deep kiss.  I heard a giggle as my shirt got pulled up, covering my face, breaking off the kiss.  I pulled the shirt the rest of the way off and added it to the pile on the floor.

 

“Careful who you tease, Missy!”

 

I slid forwarded and stopped just touching the tip of my throbbing erection at her entrance.  As I bit the crook of her neck, I heard a groan escape her lips.  I continued to kiss her neck and then moved up to her mouth.  My hand massaged her breast under the water bringing her nipple stiff and erect.  She arched her back and I listened to her breathing quicken and she moaned again and said , “Zack please!”  

 

“Told you to be careful who you teased, Sugar,” I growled.  As I kissed her, our tongues probed deeply in each other's mouths.  As she sucked my tongue into her mouth, I started to push my swollen cock into her opening and stopped and pulled slowly back out, her legs came out of the water to wrap around my waist, trying to pull me further in.  I needed to release the ache in my cock which had started ever since I saw her in the tub surrounded by bubbles and music and I was trying to hold out as long as I could.

 

I felt her nails dig into my back as she begged me again. “Zack, I need you please”. Finally, I couldn't take it any longer either; I drove my cock deep inside her. She was so tight and the water added to her tightness, the silky smoothness of her pussy was closed all around me, her muscles gripping as I slowly eased back until just the tip was again, just inside her before sliding back into her. I quickened my pace and began thrusting my hips as she pushed to meet me.  Harder and harder I pounded over and over again...... She was moaning and cried out “Zack harder, now, I have got to come!” I could feel her pussy begin to pulse around my cock, and clamping down even tighter......

 

I finally could feel my cum squirting deep within her pussy and I continued to pump into her....... As she gripped my back, I kissed her and breathed in her ear, “What you do to me, woman!  Oh Sugar, you feel so good!   Keep doing it because you are my ‘do right woman’!”

 

I couldn’t tell if she heard me because Mizz Scarlet was still coming down from her orgasm and from the smile on her face, she was once again a vision of total contentment.

 

~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~

 

Casey:  Impulses can be a good thing?!

 

No one will believe I did not orchestrate this whole thing.  Those that know me well know that anything that I plan blows up in my face every single time!

 

When Zack gave me the key to his hotel suite, to let myself in just in case he got caught in traffic. I did not think much about it. As I was driving to work my mind started thinking about that bathtub in his suite.  A bubble bath would be so sweet in that tub.  My mind was off to the races!  I needed to go to Linens & Things at lunch and get one of those bathtub pads with the pillow and while I’m there I can get some more bubble bath.  That tiny bottle of bubble bath the hotel gives surely is not enough? Maybe a candle or two, they won’t go to waste! Zack has a nice bottle of White Zinfandel in the frig and that would go perfectly with a nice bubble bath with lots of bubbles. Oh!! That bag of Hershey Kisses is still in his suite too!  Music?  I’ll bring my CD player and some CDs from the office.  Problem solved!  Finally, leave the office a little early, its Friday, I don’t have much on my desk to get done today.  I can get to his suite, have my bubble bath and be dressed and ready to go out tonight!  There you have it a simple plan!  Now I just prayed that some “Urgent” thing did not drop on my desk at the last minute.  I am cursed, that always seems to happen when I try and leave work early and plan something.

 

Things were going well.  Left early as planned (yee haw).  Found something to put the wine in with some ice, the wine glasses were right on the bar, a bowl for the Kisses.  Rats, should have started the bath water while I messed with the wine!  No problem.  So off I go to start the bath leaving the wine and Kisses on the bar! Start the water and put in a CD and start undressing to - -

 

Mustang Sally - Guess you better slow the Mustang down
Mustang Sally now Baby - Guess you better slow the Mustang down
Your run of no return - Oh I guess you gotta put your flat feet on the ground

All you wanna do is ride around Sally - Ride, Sally, Ride
Won't you be a fairly morning - I'm gonna be whapping those weeping eyes

 

Had to find something to hold my hair up! By this time the tub was just about filled - - or close enough for me! I stepped into the tub singing to - -

 

I wanna know wont you tell me, am I in love to stay?
(Take me, take me)
Take me to the river and wash me down
Wont you cleanse my soul get my feet on the ground
I don't know why you treated me so bad
Look at all these things that we could have had
Love is a notion that I wont forget
my sweet sixteen now I never regret
I wanna....

I’m all laid back with the little pillow under my head and just about relaxed when - - - OH FUCK!  The wine and kisses are still sitting on the bar!  Could not believe it!  A simple plan.  Well, I got my nice big tub, my music and Lots of Bubbles.  The wine will be there when I get out.  Besides, how can you unwrap Hershey Kisses with bubbles all over you hands anyway? Those will be waiting too! Problem Solved!

 

So I’m laying there eyes closed singing along with one of my favorite songs “Do Right Woman Do Right Man” smiling to myself - - - -

 

A woman's only human
This you should understand
She's not just a plaything
She's flesh and blood, just like her man
And if you want a do right all day woman
You've gotta be a do right all night man

 

I hear this little cough and then someone clearing their throat.  I open my eyes to see Zack leaning up against the door frame, tie loosened and a couple of buttons of his blue shirt undone. His eyes were reflecting the blue from his shirt and I sucked in my breath.  Than I saw that mischievous grin that I love on his face and his eyebrow arched.  Even in the nice hot water in the tub I got a tingling chill run up and down my body looking at that smirking image in the doorway. 

 

Without a thought, I turned on my best Scarlet O’Hara and asked him if he would fetch me the wine. Things just kept popping out of my mouth totally unplanned!  A couple of things may have been intentional.  Like when I asked him to add some hot water to the tub.  NOW!  I always slide back and forth to blend the hot water with the cooler water.  Maybe, arranging the bubbles that he added that might have been impulse?  OK, the toe releasing the plug I will admit to that one.

 

BUT when he leaned over to pour me some more wine it was impulse that grabbed his tie and pulled him into a kiss. OR it was the song on the CD playing in the background?

 

What would I give for just a few moments
What would I give just to have you near
Tell me you would try to slip away somehow
Oh I need you darling I want to see you right now
Can you slip away, slip away
Slip away, oh I need you so

Oh, the kiss!  He tugged my lip and pressed his tongue to mine and then when I felt him pinching my breast, I ignored the impulse to pull him into the tub with me.  I never thought that when I mentioned he may be “a tad over dressed” what he would do!  The look in his eyes; I thought he was going to pull me out of the tub and push me up against the wall and “do me right” and actually that was what I was hoping!  Never did I think he was going to get into the tub!  The gasped was both from surprise and the bulge in his pants as he undid his belt.  Impulse grabbed the waist band and pulled pants and boxers down in one jerk.  Pulling him closer with his tie?  He just wasn’t moving fast enough for me! Every inch closer was sending me closer and closer to climax.

As I pulled him towards me by his tie I heard “Try a Little Tenderness” start to play -

 

oh she may be weary
them young girls they do get wearied
wearing that same old funky dress
but when she gets weary
you try a little tenderness
oh man that
un hunh
i know she's waiting
just anticipating
the thing that you'll never never possess
no no no
but while she there waiting
try just a little bit of tenderness
that’s all you got to do

I pulled his tie over his head and tossed it somewhere, not caring, much less thinking at this point and started to work on the buttons of his shirt and felt him bite my neck.  A quick flash across my mind was “that does not feel real tender” but, oh my, it felt so good!  Sending another tingling wave starting at my nub and spreading through my whole body.

 

Now honestly – I wasn’t thinking except to get his shirt off the fastest way possible!  It is hard working shirt buttons with wet, soapy hands.  I didn’t mean to giggle.  But I had been holding my breath trying to suppress the groan wanting to escape my mouth as well as my begging Zack to just fuck me now!  I wanted this to last a little longer.  He was kissing me and massaging my breasts and pinching my nipples and I just jerked his shirt up interrupting his kiss and his hands that were speeding me faster and faster to climax.

 

No, he was not being tender, stopping with just the tip of his cock touching my tingling opening. The groan I had been holding in came out as he went back to biting my neck making his way back up to my lips.  His hand was massaging one breast while the other was squeezing my butt, pushing and then pulling me back from his waiting cock.  I wrapped my legs around him trying to pull him down which did not work, he was going to make me wait.!  I don’t know how many times I asked please then I finally begged him that I needed him now!

 

At that point I did not want him to “try a little tenderness”.  His pace picked up and he was pushing into me harder and harder and I could hardly breathe much less talk to tell him more or harder, damn you feel good.  I matched his rhythm pushing my hips up to meet his thrust and gasped as his cock drove deeper.   All I could do was grip his back and the more I pressed my fingernails into his back the harder and faster he pounded until finally we both came together.

 

Clinging to his back I drifted off in my climax I could hear his heavy breathing in my ear along with - - - - 

 

Oh, destination anywhere
East or west, I don't care
You see my baby don't love me no more
This old world ain't got no back door

Destination anywhere
East or west, I don't care
Destination anywhere
East or west, I don't care


I heard him saying, “What you do to me, woman! I don’t care because you are my ‘do right woman’.”  He was kissing my neck again, a favorite spot, and back up to my mouth.  He rolled over, pulling me with him, causing the water and bubbles to slosh and we cuddled in the tub with the bubbles and the candle light.  Listening to - 

 

I wanna tell you a story every man oughta know
If you want a little lovin' you gotta start real slow
She gonna love you tonight, if you just treat her right
Oh squeeze her real gentle, you gotta make her feel good
Tell her that you love her like you know you should
She gonna love you tonight if you just treat her right
If you practice my method just as hard as you can
You gonna get a reputation as a lovin' man
Yeah, you'll be glad every night that you're treatin' her right


Zack’s giggling and his chest heaving as he started to laugh shook me out of my contented state of mind.  I looked at him and he just pointed to outside the tub.  Tidal Wave was the only thing that came to mind!  I looked at him and said, “Sugar, could you add some more hot water to my bath?  The water has gone down and my bubbles are almost gone!”

“Anything you want, Mizz Scarlet!” he replied, “anything at all!!”

 

A thought darted through my mind “I would like to see the face of the maid when she comes to 'tidy' the room!”

 

Oh Fiddle-dee-deee, I’ll worry about that later!  Much, much later! I got more bubbles being made for me!

 

THE END

 

 

 

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